viernes, 1 de julio de 2011

Part of the abstract of one of my research proyects, is it well written?


The aim of this study was to establish the incidence of type I and type II clinical and subclinical ketosis in a Jersey herd in Oreamuno, Cartago using a pasture based system; and set up its relationship with milk production and body condition score in the close up period. To establish the incidence of type I ketosis, the β-hidroxibutiric acid (BHBA) was measured in blood of 114 cows, 99 (86,8%), 11 (9,6%) and 4 (3,5%) were categorized as healthy, type I subclinical ketosis and type I clinical ketosis respectively. The type II ketosis was established by measuring the BHBA concentration in blood of 117 cows, 112 (95.7%) were classified as healthy and 5 (4.3%) were classified as suffering type II subclinical ketosis; none of the cows were diagnosed as positive on type II clinical ketosis.

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  1. Yes, if you're asking me, it does seem quite well-done. There may be one or two small things I could mention, but I think it's good. What is the target audience for your paper?

    (Oh yeah, it's "projects," not "proyects")

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